教室别恋(暂译名)
原文名:Abuse of Power
作者:Razzle
整体级别:NC17
配对:OB/VM
概要:故事灵感来源于斯汀和警察乐队(Sting and the Police)的歌曲Don't Stand So Close To Me。奥兰多是个18岁的高中生。维戈是他的英文老师。看起来很直截了当,是不是?
译者的几点说明:
1、 本文纯粹为翻译练习,只贴在这里。只选择Abuse of Power 中的部分章节进行翻译,但会尽量保留原文整体故事脉络和精华。
2、 思索许久,也没有为本文想出一个合适的中文译名,于是暂借用一部瑞典电影的中文译名《教室别恋》(只是借用,不能算偷),如果大家有什么好的译名思路,欢迎与我交流。
3、 由于小说中维戈为英文老师,奥兰多是他的得意门生,因而两人对话中时常会出现莎士比亚、奥斯丁之类的文学引用。对于文中出现的这些文学引用,我会尽量查找到原始出处,至于翻译,如已有经典翻译,自然采用,如实在没有,我可能就要自己翻了(各位大师先贤,如果糟蹋了你们的原著就请原谅偶吧)。
4、 本人感觉此文难度甚高,所以错误估计会比较多,翻译起来也会比较慢,也许会出现半途而废的状况(默……),请大家做好思想准备。
Abuse of Power中的文学引用
Don’t Stand So Close To Me请不要如此靠近我
Young teacher, the subject年轻的老师
Of schoolgirl fantasy女生幻想的目标
She wants him so badly她如此渴望他
Knows what she wants to be知道她想要实现
Inside her there's longing她内心的热望
This girl's an open page这个女生是翻开的书页
Book marking - she's so close now等待批注——她如此靠近
This girl is half his age这个女生只有他一半大
Of schoolgirl fantasy女生幻想的目标
She wants him so badly她如此渴望他
Knows what she wants to be知道她想要实现
Inside her there's longing她内心的热望
This girl's an open page这个女生是翻开的书页
Book marking - she's so close now等待批注——她如此靠近
This girl is half his age这个女生只有他一半大
Don't stand, don't stand so 不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Don't stand, don't stand so不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Don't stand, don't stand so不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Her friends are so jealous她的朋友们如此嫉妒
You know how bad girls get你知道女孩们有多坏
Sometimes it's not so easy有时候成为老师的宠儿
To be the teacher's pet也不是那样容易
Temptation, frustration诱惑与挫败
So bad it makes him cry如此糟糕,令他放声呼喊
Wet bus stop, she's waiting她站在下雨的公车站
His car is warm and dry他的车温暖而干燥
Her friends are so jealous她的朋友们如此嫉妒
You know how bad girls get你知道女孩们有多坏
Sometimes it's not so easy有时候成为老师的宠儿
To be the teacher's pet也不是那样容易
Temptation, frustration诱惑与挫败
So bad it makes him cry如此糟糕,令他放声呼喊
Wet bus stop, she's waiting她站在下雨的公车站
His car is warm and dry他的车温暖而干燥
Don't stand, don't stand so 不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Don't stand, don't stand so不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Don't stand, don't stand so不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Loose talk in the classroom教室里的流言
To hurt they try and try不依不饶的伤害
Strong words in the staffroom教研室里的厉语
The accusations fly漫天纷飞的指责
It's no use, he sees her可一切都无用,他一看见她
He starts to shake, he starts to cough他开始颤抖,他开始咳嗽
Just like the old man in就像纳博科夫
That famous book by Nabakov那本著名小说里的老男人
Loose talk in the classroom教室里的流言
To hurt they try and try不依不饶的伤害
Strong words in the staffroom教研室里的厉语
The accusations fly漫天纷飞的指责
It's no use, he sees her可一切都无用,他一看见她
He starts to shake, he starts to cough他开始颤抖,他开始咳嗽
Just like the old man in就像纳博科夫
That famous book by Nabakov那本著名小说里的老男人
Don't stand, don't stand so 不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
Don't stand, don't stand so不要,不要
Don't stand so close to me不要如此靠近我
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