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Most of us have a new opinion about our university’s life.

  Not everything in life is well worth our risk. But we should patient with our life. Life likes a mirror. You smile with it, it will smile with you, if you cry, it will cry too.

  However, the situation was far from perfect.

  I have a good friend had lost her boyfriend. The only reason is his heart was tired. It seems that he never loved her. I felt very sad. I began worried about my love. I don’t want lose my girlfriend. I loved her so much.

  Form this time, The friend of mine who lost her boyfriend always staring into space. I’m able to reach out to her and talk to her. Through her words, I think everyone who lost her (his) boyfriend (girlfriend) must face to it. We have our life, we should understand that what was frustrating. 

（Most of us have a new opinion about our university’s life.

    Not everything in life is well worth our risk.与主题关系不大可删去 ）Life likes a mirror. You smile with it, it will smile with you, if you cry, it will cry too. So we should be patient with life. However, the situation is far from perfect.

    I have a good friend who had lost her boyfriend. The only reason is his heart was tired. It seemed that he never loved her. I felt very sad and began to worry about my love. I didn’t want to lose my girlfriend. I loved her so much.

Form that time, the friend of mine who had lost her boyfriend has always been staring into space.(现在完成进行时) I’m able to reach out to her and talk to her. Through her words, I think everyone who lost her (his) boyfriend (girlfriend) must face it. We have our life, we should understand what is frustration.  

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