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An angry thing

An angry thing happened in this winter holiday. I think I’ll enjoy my holiday, but this thing made me angry.

I live in a small village, where has beautiful se scenery and you can see the birds everywhere. But one day I found a bird die behind my house; at first I thought the bird is died of frost. However the strange thing happened again and again. So I began to find the reason. To my surprise, I found a bird not there. When I saw this reason, to my surprise, I found a bird not there. When I saw this and I’m very angry. Afterwards, I set a survey and found that the bird net was made by my neighbor. Then I asked him to remove it down, but he didn’t do it, on the contrary, he call names to me. This made me extreme angry.

Nowadays people only developing economic but they ignoring nature protect. I think everybody is selfish, they only think of they own interest. I don’t know when people will take set ion to protect the nature.

A Provoking Thing

A provoking thing happened in this winter holiday. I thought I would enjoy my holiday, but this thing made me angry.

I live in a small village, where has beautiful scenery and you can see the birds everywhere. But one day I found a bird died behind my house, at first I thought the bird died of frost. However, the strange thing happened again and again. So I began to seek for the reason. To my surprise, I found a bird net there. When I saw this I was very angry. Afterwards, I set a survey and found that my neighbor made the bird net. Then I asked him to remove it, but he didn’t, on the contrary, he call my name. This made me extremely angry.

Nowadays people only develop economic and ignore nature protection. I think everybody is selfish, only think of their own interest. I don’t know when people will take action to protect the nature.

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文章叙述清楚，主题明确。用词上还有些错误，注意改正。不错，继续努力！