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Makes one day which I is angry

     Oh, my  dear!  It is  half  past seven, I  must be quickly, or I  will  be  late. So I do  everything  in a hurry: cleaning  my teeth, washing face...  In a few minutes, everything is almost OK. But unfortunately, when I was taking the clothes which was hanged outside, my towel fell down. So I ran quickly to the downstairs . When I picked it up ,suddenly I felt some water falling on my head. I realized that somebody upstairs pour the water down. I was very angry ,but I didn't know who did it. I thought that I must be the  most unlucky people in the world at that moment.I have no way but go back to the dormitory to change my clothes. Then I rushed to the classroom without having breakfast.

    Today, is really a worst day in my life.

The Worst Day

   Oh, my dear! It was half past seven. I must be quick, or I would be late. So I did everything in a hurry: cleaned my teeth, washed my face... In a few minutes, everything was almost OK. But unfortunately, when I was taking the clothes which was hanged outside, my towel felled down. So I ran quickly downstairs. When I picked it up, suddenly some water felled on my head. I realized that somebody upstairs poured water down. I was very angry, but I didn't know who did it. I thought that I must be the most unlucky people in the world at that moment. I had no way but go back to the dormitory to change my clothes. Then I rushed to the classroom without having breakfast.

   Today is really the worst day in my life.

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