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考研英语作文务必熟记的重点句式
1. It is (has been) estimated that the world's population could reach 6 billion by the end of the century.
2. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies to co
ntrol population growth while raising the quality of the population.
3. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't utter a word.
4. It's hard to say whether the plan is practicable.
5. It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.
6. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
7. As is known man is the product of labour.
8. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we can overcome.
9. It seems certain that they have made a series of experiments.
10. It must be admitted that you haven't done what you promised to do.
11. It is certain that we have a long way to go.
12. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for peace.
13. It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours each day.
14. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.
15. It is said that bats have been using radar for millions of years.
16. To tell the truth, many mistakes we made could have been avoided.
17. As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
18. In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you saw.
19. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.
20. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.
21. It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, made up of atoms.
22. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.
23. It has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose base must be completed within this year.
24. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth may not apply to things happening here.
25. It is obvious (evident) that the success of the innovation depends on our concerted efforts.
26. It is natural that one may have trouble expressing complicated ideas in simple English.
27. We will be successful as long as we persevere.
28. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is being carried out.
29. It is true that we must redouble our efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed countries.
30. I take it for granted that they will support this idea. I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea.
31. In a certain sense, a successful scientist is a person who is never satisfied with what he has achieved.
32. It is a common saying that man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.
33. The oceans do not so much divide the world as unite it.
34. It can be said that without knowledge of science and technology, it is impossible to build socialist modernizations.
35. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the production.
36. Now in China, more and more families can afford to buy high-grade goods, such as washing machines, TV sets, videocorders.
作文篇!
刚刚整理资料时发现的,感觉还不错啊!
作文关键是多写,多背,尤其是一些好词,好句,好的论说文。
学会了怎样起承转合,那你的作文就算基本过关了。
第一部分是曹其军作文指导。
第二部分是朱太奇的作文讲座。
第三部分是作文常见句型(分为首段,中间段和结尾段)
第四部分是几个作文模版
第五部分是作文的写作步骤(即如何起承转合)
如果你有什么好的作文也可以贴上来,让我们大家一起分享:)
考研作文一:
考研作文讲座
曹其军
曹说:考场作文通常是写成三段(四段当然也可以,不过一般情况下三段比较合适)。但
是从改卷老师的角度,这三段份量是不同的。一般看到第一段,印象分就已经下来了,所
以第一段很关键。第二段老师一般不看,即便看也只是看有没有明显的病句。然后会着重
再看一下第三段。从上面可以看出来,第一段跟第三段是关键,有什么特殊的优美的句子
尽管用,长难句最好。但是第二段要用短句而不要用长句(!!!切记),因为长句容易
出错。
所以曹的作文着重讲的就是第一段跟第三段如何写。至于第二段,自己发挥去。
我会把去年的一些笔记(很可惜大部分记在笔记本上丢了仅剩下记在讲义上的一些残余)
一起写出来。并且加上脚注。黑体表示一个字都不能改,就照单背下。斜体表示可以改的地方。
曹的作文一共分成八个MODEL,下面是Model 1,在看完model后最好背下来,然后完成
后面的application,做一两篇熟悉一下。
MODEL 1 Poblem-Solution(问题以及问题的解决)
Smaple One
As can be easily observed from the cartoon, intellectuals of middle agg in our country are
making great contributions, but they also suffer from the poor working and living conditions.
Just take a look at the man in the picture. Under the dim light, he is bent on his study while
taking food. He is thin and the bottles of medicine on the table show that he is very poor in health.
From the picture, it is obvious that the issue of intellectuals' treatment has really become more
and more serious.
This problem may arise from the following factors. To begin with, there is often a shortage of investment on scientific study. According to a recently published report from the State Council(国务院), only 3% of the total GDP was invested in the development of science and technology last year. The report also predicts that future investment will most probably remain unchanged. Consequently, the shortage of fund has a direct impact upon intellectuals' work and health. In the second place, though the central government(中央政府) has made various policies to improve intellectures' conditions, some local governments won't implement these policies effectively. Sometimes these governments even intentionally pay no attention to the requests by intellectuals. Last but not the least, most of the intellectuals ignore the importance of sports and outdoor activities. This also gives rise to their poor health and less efficient work.
The current situation calls for an immediate solution indeed. In my opinion, both the government and the intellectuals should play their role. On one hand, the government should grant more funds to intellectuals. On the other hand, intellectuals should be aware of the importance of their health, and try every means to build up their health. Only in these co-operative efforts, I believe , will the problem be efficiently resolved.
第一段提出问题,这个是个sample是个漫画式作文,但是可以归到model 1里面。注意一下 ,该漫画对第二,三两段没有任何响,象第二段的According to 之类的废话,不要迟疑
,背下来。
Sample Two
Nowadays one of the fundamental problems China is faced with is the increasing illiteracy(可改成sociological,environmental等根据topic) among the adolescents. According to a recent survey made by Dr. Wang, head of educational department of Beijing University, about 24% of the children between 8 to 15 years old have dropped out of school across the country. The same survey also shows that the number of drop-outs is likely to grow in the years to come. Therefore, it is very clear that illiteracy has been getting more and more serious.(只有serious了才能体现其紧迫感重要性)
To account for illiteracy, people have come up with various causes as demonstrated below. For one thing, many families are still too poor to afford schooling for their kids. Take my neighbor as an example(或者A good case in point is my neighbour). There are five members and four adults were laid off(下岗符合国情) last year. Then life gets very hard for them. Finally, the only child has to leave the school. Actually, poverty is always the major factor behind illiteracy in China. On the other hand, some parents believe that schooling is useless, particularly for girls. They often force their kids to leave school and send them to work.. In the end, some students are bored of the school life, and they drop out to escape teachers and school lesson.
Whatever the reason, the issue has turned a crippling(造成重大损害的)force to the development of our country. Therefore, some measures should be taken to put an end to this problem. On one hand, our government should make stricter law to forbid parents to take kids away from school. In addition, more funds should be put in to the help of those poor students. On the other hand, we should launch a publicizing campaign(群众运动,具有中国特色,一定要写) to enhance people's awareness of the harmfulness of illiteracy to our economy and life. Only through these attempts can we hope to solve the problem.
这个model我极其喜爱,因为我考研就是套这个model的,虽然我写完后都不知道写什么意
思,但是还是得到了一个比较高的分数。第一段提出了问题,就是中国的文盲问题。第二
段分析现象,产生原因。大家千万不要小看了Take my neighbor as an example这句话,
是举出证据支持论点,不论什么事情,都说你的neighbor,比方说爱滋病问题,你就说邻
居家有人得了爱滋病,比方说下岗,就说邻居家全部下岗生不如死。再注意一下poverty
is always the major factor behind ,这里是原因前结果后的句子,背。
第三段极力推荐背下来,第一句中的reason,如果是说“结果”则要换成consequence;最
后的country可以换成society,life,world之类的词语。第一句起到承上启下的作用,优
美,背。群众运动不能忘记,否则文革怎么产生,要发动群众运动去enhance people's a
wareness增强民众的觉悟,重要,背。最后一句倒装句保证让老师对你的印象更好。
Application:
1 On Widespread Superstition(Fa Lun gong etc.) 普遍流行的迷信
A Current Situation
B Some Consequences (家庭被破坏,影响身体健康,注意影响身体健康是万金 油)
C suggestions
2 Desertification(土壤沙漠化)
A present condition
B possible effects (诸如粮食短缺城市消失)
C solutions
3 Women's salaries are significantly lower than men's in business in different countries as the following tow tables show. Make full use of the information and write an essay of about 200 words. Be sure to include your comment.(table省略)
这个是女性待遇问题,仿造Sample One。
Model 2 Positive-Enhancement
Sample One
There has been a growing concern among the general public over the population census which is now being conducted in our country. According to a recent poll made by Beijing Youth Daily, a local newspaper, about 87 percent of the residents have a good understanding of the census, and they are very cooperative(支持)with it. The same survey also shows that more
people are concerned about the result of the census. It can be easily concluded, therefore, that the census has become an important issue in our life.
Its importance may be demonstrated in two ways as follow. To begin with, the census is directly related to the society in general. On one hand, our country has long carried out the policy of birth control, and regular census may help us get a better idea of our population growth. On the other hand, with the reform and opening-up, there has been a widespread mass migration movement. Many farmers leave their home villages to seek job in the cities. Then it is necessary to know the population migration trend through census, so that the government may make better use of the labor force. What's more, the census is bound up with our personal life. It is the best way to measure our living standard, including living space, education level, and employment.
As the issue of census plays such a key role in our society and life, due attention should be paid from both the government and the general public. The government should make sure that the census is successfully done and finished, and the general public should offer a helping hand whenever necessary. As for myself, I should take part in the publicizing campaign so that more people will understand the importance of census.
这个model是讲好得东西,比如说入世,申奥,大学合并(其实我觉得大学合并简
直是垃圾不过既然国家这么做所以如果出题目的时候你只能说它是好的)。
a growing concern,越来越关注,多好的说法。注意第一段还把北京青年报给搬
了出来,跟model 1 的北大教授一样,这是给人权威的说法。咱们是小人物阿说话不顶
事,但是权威人物或者正式刊物可就不一样了。 be cooperative with 支持,既然是好
的东西公众自然都要支持了,不支持就罚你的款^_^。
第二段是垃圾自己去编,在分析好的时候提供如下建议,分析其对社会好,对生活
好,对身体好。
看第三段,due attention,应有的重视,很少人能想到这个词吧。the general
public should offer a helping hand whenever necessary,对于老百姓来说,该出手
时候就出手,决不能迟疑。最后提到As for myself,对于我们这样的小人物,所能做的
唯一的事情,就是参与宣传活动。
Application: 1 Project Hope
2 On Bid for Olympic Games
3 University Merging(就是臭名昭著的大学合并)
大学合并有什么好处呢?
节约资源,有更多地方锻炼身体(虽然风马牛不相及)
但是最关键是要有幻想,因为你即便写的好处在道理上狗屁不通
也没人会管你,你所做的只是凑字数!!!
Model 3 Point-Evidence(neutral topic + proverb + definition)
中性主题 谚语
Sample One
As shown in the graph, it can be easily concluded that the past twenty years have witnessed some ups and downs in China's growth rate whereas there has been a steady increase in the amount of GDP. According to the statistics published by the State Bureau of Statistics in 1978, China's GDP was 362.4 billion in Renminbi, and it grew to be 7477.2 billion in 1997,almost 27 times higher. From the graph, it can also be predicted that China's GDP will continue to increase in the future while its growth rate remains steady.
This tendency of GDP increase may be attributed to the following reasons. First of all, with the improvement of people's living standard, there will be a greater demand for goods and services of all kinds. A good case in point is the Internet. As it comes into our daily life, people need more information and better services. There will provide and incentive for further development in computer technology and manpower. What's more, in terms of production, China will need to build more roads, railways, and power stations in order to become stronger. More natural resources need to be exploited and used for the benefit of people. Last but not the least, China's entry into WTO will greatly improve the export environment of international trade. As a result, the future export is going to play a more important role in China's GDP growth.
Based on those reasons as illustrated above,I firmly believe that China will experience a stage of continuous, steady and healthy expansion in the years to come. In the long run, it is evident that China will become ever-stronger, and the Chinese will live a better life than ever.
注意哦,考场上***不准写比较结构***,太容易出错了!!!上面这篇范文,就提
到了比较级的用法。look,要用就用这种简单明了不会出错的比较级用法,列举出前后
的数据,然后说“almost xx times higher”。
看第一句哦,the past twenty years have witnessed,这是一种表示被动的说法
,根据时间段。in China's growth中in用来表示该文主题。还有个很优美的形容词stea
dy,如果是大起大落要用sharp哦。increase表示增加,如果图中是下落就要用fall或者
decrease。 grew to be 如果是下降要改成dropped to be。
本文的第三段可写可不写,都是垃圾,不过为了凑段数凑字数还是要写的拉hiahia
Sample Two
As we all know, honesty is the best policy. This is an accumulated experience we inherit from our forefathers, and now it is still widely applied to our daily life.
To illustrate the point, let me cite a case of Nokia, a mobile phone manufac turer. In the very beginning, it had the largest marker share in China. According to an official publication released in July 1999, about 47 percent of mobile phone users expressed their preference for Nokia, while only 16 percent liked Motorola, Nokia's major competitor. This year, however, the opposite situation occurs, and Nokia is said to be phasing out quickly. A major reason behind this sudden reversion, as pointed out by some experts, lies with Nokia's being dishonest with its product and service. For example, Nokia promised free service for repair, but any real repair may cost dearly. This way, by and by, Nokia is losing its customers and market.
A lesson that we can draw from this example is quite obvious. Honesty is crucial and essential to any one. With the rapid development of internet and other modern technologies, our world is changing fast and becoming increasingly uncertain. It is, therefore, not only important but necessary to be honest now.
Application: 1。 Ageing Population in China
生活水平提高,医疗水平发展,出生率下降.
2。 When in Rome, do as Romans do.(i.e. adaptatin to life or
society)
3。 What does love mean to us?
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Model 4 Fact-Method
Sample One
Nowadays tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to finance one’s college education has become a matter of great concern for many people, particularly the young students and their family. Actually just as there is more than one way to skin a cat, so it seems we can deal with tuition and fees in many ways. Some can get all the needed money from their parents. Some others can apply for a loan specially set up for college students. Still others can also raise the money completely by themselves, by doing s full-time job in the summer and winter holidays. Or even others can ask their parents to provide the greater part and earn the rest in their spare time by doing a part-time job.
In my opinion, the last method may prove to be quite beneficial in many respects. Having obtained most of the tuition and fees from one’s parents, one needn’t w worry too much about the money and can concentrate on his studies. After all, it is the duty of any college student to study hard and well. On the other hand, a part-time job in one’s spare time will enrich his campus life. Through the part-time job one can make a lot of friends, improve one’s social skills and learn many practical things. Therefore, I would choose this way, if possible, to cover my tuition and fees.
上面范文是一年六级考试的作文,题目是 How do I finance my college education?注意这种题所谓的method就是要回答HOW。
如果要扩充一种方法就是用邻居的故事展开。
Application: 1. How to succeed in a job interview?
2. On making friends.
3. Arranging tour for a coming friend.
Model 5 contrast side A against side B 针锋相对
Sample One
As regards the farmer migration into the cities, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. A majority of people argue that this mass migration is beneficial to the development of both the countryside and the cities. Other people, however, hold that there are more disadvantages arising from this migration movement.
People who believe in the beneficial side of such migration may have some arguments as follows. To begin with, farmers can earn more money by finding jobs in the cities. Most of them will send part of their income back home to their family. This in turn helps expand the economy of the countryside. What’s more, these farmers also help develop the cities in many ways. According to a recent survey as published in the newspaper, most of the construction projects in Beijing are actually done by farmers.
In contrast, some people think that farmer migration may give rise to(导致) a series of negative effects as well. These people worry that, with the spread of migration, more land in the countryside will be deserted. This will give rise to a shortage of grain. Some facts about widespread of deserted land have been published recently in the newspapers. In addition, it is also suggested that rising crimes in the cities are related to this migration.
Just as any coin has two sides, it’s no exception with the issue of farmer migration. Though this migration has indeed brought about some negative effects on our society, its benefits are even more obvious. In my opinion, our government should try its best to raise the price of agricultural products, so that farmers needn’t go into the cities to get rich. Of course, when there is a surplus of labor force in the countryside, farmers should also be encouraged to move to cities for a better living.
As regards。。。后跟名词或用whether加动词加句子。
第三段的in contrast表示二三两段内容针锋相对。
Application: 1. On Internet in Our Life 信息丰富,方便交流VS 浪费金钱,损害健康
2. Should college students set up their company?
挣钱,服务社会 VS 影响学业,影响健康
3. To job - hop(跳槽) or not : this is a problem
能挣更多money VS 没法build a career,失信于人
提示:如果想不到就想健康。放心,老师不会因为你信口雌黄而特别留意你的作文。
Model 6 Comparison between A and B
Sample One
When it comes to the choice between going to the West and staying in cities, different graduates hold radically different views. Some people argue that it’s the right time to go to the West. Other people, however, believe that staying in cities outweighs going to the West in almost every aspect.
In the eyes of the first group of people, going to the West is characterized(具有如下特点) by the following features. For a start, with the policy to develop the West, there will be more chances of improving oneself and using the textbook knowledge, and the hence the best choice for graduates., In the second place, the West is rich in natural resources, the exploitation of which calls for talents with higher education. In the West, the graduates will easily turn their knowledge to use. Of course, it is also admitted that some inconveniences will come up.(该句表示转折,必须写) For example, there is a poor transportation in the West. Sometimes it takes hours on the road when people are traveling from one place to another.
In comparison, those who argue for staying in cities have some arguments as follows. On one hand, the cities will provide a better living conditions. S we all know, there is still a wide gap between the West and the East. To seek a better life is undoubtedly a major goal for most of the graduates. On the other hand, in this age of information and technology, the urban environment enables graduates to be up to date. However, staying in the cities also brings some handicaps to young graduates(这句就是提出带来不足的地方). One aspect may be that there will be fierce competition in the cities for job opportunities and housing.
As discussed above, it is obvious that each side has its distinctive characteristics. If I am allowed to make a decision, I prefer going to the West for the following two considerations. For one thing, I like the local culture in the West, and I’ve long thought of getting a deep understanding of the West. For another, the West can allow me to choose my own way of lining.
Application: 1. Where to educate our Kids: abroad or at Home?
2. Shopping by Internet or by Window: which way?
3. Campus living: a roommate or alone?
Model 7 Letter(E-mail)
Sample One
To: bjrv@163.com
From: reader@hotmail.com
Subject: China Recommendation System 注意,这四行都是格式
Data: October 10,2001
这里空一行
Dear Editor:
这里再空一行
As is fairly well-known to anyone, particularly the young, Recommendation Admission System has been in practice in China over the past 20 years. There is no denying that the System has benefited a large number of senior middle school graduates. But in my point of view, the System does more harm and should be completely denied as soon as possible.
In support of my view, the very first point I would like to touch upon is concerned with equality among the candidates, which I regard as a basic right to each student. The System offers opportunity to quite a few lucky ones while the majority of students have to compete fiercely for this opportunity. As it is, most candidates are actually discriminated against in one way or the other. What’s more, the System often works in the interest of those people who can manage to get favorable recommendation from the senior middle school. There are already quite a few reports in various media of such abuse of the System. Ss a result, the System can not ensure that the most outstanding students are admitted. To make things worse, the whole society may lose its confidence in this test system.
Accordingly, I strongly believe it meaningful and significant to suspend the Recommendation Admission System. It is also my hope that every candidate can realize his dream through equal competition.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hai
注意格式哟,每段必须空一行,段首不空格。
信函必须通过信体体现出身份。
Sample Two (狂背)
788 North 32nd Street
Milwaukee,Wisconsin 53216
Nov. 30. 2001
Mr. Frederick Broadheim 收信人名字
Director of Marketing 收信人职务
Deka Chemicals, Inc. 收信人单位
5211 Chekmate Drive 收信人地址
Anchorage, Alaska 99504
Dear Mr.Broadheim: (如果名字不知道的话,这里写 Dear Sir/Madam)
The enclosed resume shows some of the reasons why I believe I am qualified to assume the position of assistant product manager, listed in the October issue of American Marketing(这个是广告登在何处,求职信必须写消息来源) magazine. Would you please consider me an applicant for the job?(标点都不能改)
As my resume shows, I received my BA in marketing(这里改成你自己的专业) from Marquette University last month. For the past four years, I have worked for the Wisconsin Metals Company, part time while school was in session and full time in summers. During these four years, I have performed various duties in the marketing department, including consumer research work for the product managers. In addition, my minor in Marquette was in chemistry(改成辅修专业), and I received A or B+ grades in all my chemistry courses.
What my resume does not show is that I am an ambitious(有理想有抱负), hard working person who enjoys the challenges(职务的挑战) of product development and marketing , challenges (给对方戴高帽,最高境界就是面不红耳不赤地吹捧)which I know Deka Chemicals has met so well for so many years. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you my qualifications for the position of assistant product manager for Deka. I understand from your ad. that an interview can be arranged in the Milwaukee area in early December. Please write or call me to arrange an interview at you convenience. My telephone number is 555-7875.
Sincerely yours,
Alfred h.Yellen
Enclosure (这里代表了前文的resume)
Application: 1. A letter of Application
2. An E-mail of Invitation for a Meeting
3.A letter of recommendation
Model 8 Report (Memo + Speech)
Sample One
To: Mr.G.Gates
From: John J.Repensek
Subject: Views on China’s Entry into WTO
Data: December 20.2001
As required I chose 500 middle class subjects and asked them, through telephone, about what they thought about the recent entry of China into WTO. Here is what I get from the survey.
For the majority of people(about 56% of the total), this entry into WTO is a great success both nationally and internationally. They argue that, on one hand, it stands for the government’s determination to open China further to the world. In so doing, the ordinary people can benefit the most. On the other hand, they also believe that WTO needs China, for it is well known that China, with the largest population, is quickly becoming the largest market on the globe.
A smaller group of subjects(about 35% of the total) remain suspicious, or pessimistic, of the event. They express deep concern for the future of China’s nationalized enterprises. For them, foreign competitors would certainly destroy domestic products and service system. Besides, they hold that there will be millions of unemployment.
Still about 9% of the respondents show no interest in the topic, and they seem to be wholly ignorant of the matter. When the event was explained, they replied that it has nothing to do with them or their life.
If you need any further information on the survey, please let me know.
Application: 1. A speech on Tele-education
2. A memo on Jobs Assignment
3. A report on a Traffic Accident
考研作文二:
短文写作基本模式
(一)议论文
(1)
It is generally believed that . . is a hot topic which is widely talked about both at home and abroad .Now our government attaches great importance to solving this problem.Scicntists in this field have put forward a number of suggestions tending to relieve it.To begin with,we should . . Furthermore, . . It is clear that . . .
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people think that . . According to them,all of us should . . Others argue that . . In their opinion,nobody can . . without . . There is no doubt that . . As a consequence . .
In short,I firmly support the view that . . It is because . . So my conclusion is that . . (107 words)
(2)
There is no denying the fact that … is popular topic which is much talked about not only by …, but also by … It is generally thought that … The reasons for … are as follows.To begin with, … Secondly , … Therefore,we should attach great significance to solving the problem.
There are , I think ,at least two possible ways to cope with it .The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do) … The other policy that is worth adopting is to work out new regulations to (do) … Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future.
To conclude ,it seems obvious … So the prospect we are looking forward to will be both bright and encouraging.(127 words)
(二)图表作文
As is shown in the table (or in the picutre) , … dropped from … in 1996 .According to the figures given in the table, … has greatly increased ( or decreased ) in the past … years ( or decades ), reaching … in 1996.From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline ( or rise ) in … It is clear that …
There are at least two good reasons for … On the one hand, … Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in … On the other hand, … is due to the fact that … In addition, … is responsible for … Maybe there are some other reasons to show … But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.
As far as I am concerned, I believe that …… I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(126 words)
好作文不得不用的句子
常用句型
段首句
1. ______________ is known as one of the most serious problems in today’s society. We can see it almost everywhere. As the graph depicts, ______________ .
2. From the cartoon, we can see that. It’s a forceful satire on the kind of ______________ .
3. From the first graph, we learn that ______________. According to the statistics shown in the second graph, we can see that ______________.
4. This table shown us that ______________. The figures indicate that there is an inspiring tendency of ______________.
5. What you first think of when seeing this cartoon might be that ______________. As a matter of fact, this cartoon reveals a typical social phenomenon.
6. According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
7. There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
8. Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.
9. Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
10. ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
11. Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
12. For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
13. It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
14. ______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can’t be avoided.
15. ______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
16. Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
17. ______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
18. Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.
19. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
20. It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.
21. There is an old saying, ______________. It’s the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.
22. The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.
23. ______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.
24. One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
25. One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.
26. “Why do ______________?” Many people often ask questions like this.
27. In recent years, there is a general tendency to ______________. According to a study, there is ______________. compared with ______________ last year. Why ______________?
28. According to a survey, there is a growing number of ______________. What brings this result? The main reason rests with.
29. Some people prefer to ______________. In their opinion, ______________. In addition, ______________. Nevertheless, nowadays, ______________ has become more and more common.
30. Today, there ______________, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ______________ second, ______________. What makes things worse is that ______________.
31. Nowadays, ______________ has become a problem we have to face. Though it’s easier said than done, with the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it.
32. Many people are inclined to ______________. In their opinion, ______________. They believe that ______________.
33. From the graph/chart, we know the statistics of ______________ and ______________. It can be seen easily that ______________.
34. According to the two graphs presented, it can be observed that ______________. In the left graph, ______________. At the same time, ______________ as the right graph shows.
35. The graph shows the general trend in ______________.
36. According to the figures/numbers/statistics/percentages in the table/chart/bar graph/line graph, it can be seen that ______________. Obviously, ______________, but why?
37. The figure indicates/shows/suggests/proves that ______________. There is a steady/rapid development/trend of ______________.
38. These days we are often told that ______________. But is it true?
39. These days we often hear about ______________. But is this really the case?
40. One of the great writers once said that ______________. Now it still has a realistic significance.
41. In our history, the idea that ______________ never has been so popular. On one hand, ______________, on the other hand, ______________.
42. There are different opinions among people as to ______________. Some people suggest that ______________.
43. Some people hold the opinion that ______________ is superior to ______________ in many ways: Others, however, disagree with it.
44. Nowadays although more and more people ______________, still there are some who think ______________, they may think ______________.
中间段
1. The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that ______________. Consequently, ______________.
2. No matter you like it or not, AAA has become more and more popular and there are many reason for it.
3. It’s an urgent task for us to change this unfavorable situation: ______________.
4. The picture can reminds you of some strange, yet familiar phenomena existing in our society.
5. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that ______________. Others argue that ______________.
6. Confronted with AAA, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.
7. However, ______________ may cause some problems. First, it is ______________. Second, ______________. Finally, ______________. So, it is clear that ______________ has its advantages and disadvantages.
8. Although ______________ has a great advantage of ______________, it can’t compete with ______________ in ______________.
9. ______________ may be preferable to ______________, but ______________ suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.
10. The advantages of ______________ are much greater that those of ______________. For instance, ______________.
11. ______________ may be preferable to ______________, but it also suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.
12. But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ______________. For instance, ______________. Worst of all, ______________.
13. There are many ways to ______________. First, ______________. Second, ______________. Third, ______________.
14. On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ______________. They believe ______________. Moreover, they think ______________.
15. There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can ______________, there are a number of advantages of ______________. Another solution is to ______________.
16. It is high time that something was done about it. For example, ______________. In addition, ______________. All these measures will certainly ______________.
17. There are some other people, who ______________. Their reasons are different, something for ______________, sometimes for ______________, and sometimes simply for ______________.
18. ______________ is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction. First, ______________. What’s more, ______________. Most important of all, ______________.
19. However, if not managed properly, ______________ can create many problems. Sometimes ______________. Furthermore, ______________. Therefore, ______________ has been gaining public concern.
20. There are probably many reasons for ______________. First, ______________. Second, ______________. Finally, ______________.
21. Well, why is there ______________? I think there might be two reasons. One is ______________, and the other is ______________.
22. There are, I think, two main reasons for ______________. In the first place, ______________. In the second place, ______________. Therefore, ______________.
23. Why ______________? For one thing, ______________. For another, ______________. Perhaps the main reason is ______________.
24. It is no easy job to find the reasons for this tendency which involves several complicated factors. For some ______________. For others ______________.
25. Why ______________? The first reason is that ______________. The second reason is ______________. The third is ______________. For all this, the main cause of ______________ is due to ______________.
26. It is reasonable to maintain that ______________, but it would be foolish to persist that ______________. There are three reasons ______________.
27. The explanation for this problem involves many factors. For one thins, ______________. For another, ______________. Still ______________.
28. The causes for ______________ are varied. They include ______________. Perhaps the main cause is ______________.
29. The eventual result it brings out is ______________. And perhaps the most obvious result of ______________ is ______________.
30. However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______________ also has its own disadvantages, such as, ______________. besides, ______________.
31. ______________ will bring the society many benefits. For one thing, ______________. For another thing, ______________.
32. Why ______________? Some ______________. And the most common case is that ______________. The notable example is to ______________.
33. There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the following are the typical ones. For one thing, ______________, in addition, ______________. The main reason is that ______________.
34. People had figured out many ways to solve this problem. Firstly ______________. Though this method has its good sides like it can ______________. One of its bad sides it brings about is that it can ______________.
35. Some reasons can explain the trend. First, ______________. Second, ______________. Third, ______________.
36. One of the reasons that is given for ______________ is that ______________.
37. A further reason why I advocate an attitude of ______________ is that ______________.
38. What is more, the essence of ______________ is that ______________, although we cannot, most of us ______________.
39. Nonetheless, I reckon that ______________ is more advantageous.
40. From a personal perspective, I also prefer to ______________ because ______________.
41. To make a moral point, I feel that ______________ is important for ______________ is that ______________.
42. The main reason why I feel that ______________ is important for ______________ is that ______________.
43. ______________ is superior in several ways, of which perhaps the most fundamental is that ______________.
44. There are numerous reasons why ______________, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones.
45. One very strong argument for ______________ is that______________.
46. Moving on to wider themes, many people would argue that ______________ is important for ______________ because ______________.
47. Of course, I am aware that both ways have potential pitfalls.
48. The advantages of ______________ carry more weight that those of ______________.
49. I can think of better illustration of this idea than the example of ______________.
50. Perhaps the most important example of ______________ is ______________.
51. I fully agree with the statement that ______________. The reasons are chiefly as follows.
52. I fully agree with the statement that ______________ because ______________.
53. As far as I am concerned, my favor goes to ______________. The followings are the reasons of my choices. Firstly ______________, secondly, ______________.
54. Of these two ways of ______________, I inclined to this point of view which ______________. First of all, ______________, secondly, ______________.
55. But there are still many people who don’t agree. They argue that ______________.
56. However, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. The idea is easily supported by foots that ______________.
57. For all the disadvantages, ______________ has its compensating advantages. Firstly ______________, secondly, ______________..
结尾句
1. The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.
2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________.
3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.
4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.
5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.
6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.
7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.
8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.
9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.
10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.
11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.
12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.
13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.
14. Personally, I believer that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.
15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.
16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.
17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.
18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.
19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.
21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.
22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.
23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.
24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.
25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.
26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.
27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.
28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately.
29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.
30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.
31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.
32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.
33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.
34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.
35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.
36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.
37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ______________.
38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.
39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.
40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.
41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________. And I believe that ______________.
42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.
43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.
44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.
45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.
46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.
47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.
48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.
49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.
50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.
51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.
52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.
53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.
54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.
55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.
56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.
57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me, ______________.
作文中常用引语和句套
作文中常用句套:
下文中出现的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.
开头:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事
(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
进行对比:
The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
承上启下:
To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...
A study of ... will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
>From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that ...
In summary, it is wiser ...
In short...
在作文中引用合适的名言警句,会给你的文章增色许多。这里收集了我本人喜爱
的一些名言,可能会对你有用。我们使用引用的位置可以在开头结尾或正文段落
中,
常见的使用形式如下:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
Useful quotations
逆境
by Robert Collier
In every adversity there lies the seed of an equivalent advantage. In
every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory
next time.
努力与成功
by Ann Landers
Opportunities are usually disguised as hard work, so most people
don't recognize them.
坚持
by Ralph Waldo Emerson
No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourselves.
Confucius 孔子
Our greatest glory is not in never falling...
but in rising every time we fall.
坚持
Mother Teresa
To keep a lamp burning we have to keep putting oil in it.
Henry Ford
Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it inuo small jobs.
Winston Churchill
Never, never, never, never give up.
Albert Einstein
In uhe middle of difficulty lies opportunity.
努力与成功
by Crassus
Those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly.
Thomas Edison
There is no substitute for hard work.
Leo Tolstoi
The strongest of all warriors are these two- Time and Patience.
Thomas Jefferson
I'm a great believer in luck,
and I find the harder I work...
the more I have of it.
Robert Collier
Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.
Ray A. Croc
Luck is a dividend of sweat. The more you sweat, the luckier you
get.
实际经验与间接经验
You'll learn more about a road by traveling it...
than by consulting all the maps in the world.
动机与结果
Vince Lombardi
Winning isn't everything...
but wanting to win is.
John F. Kennedy
We choose to go!to the moon and other things , oot because they are
easy, but because they are hard.
Thucydides
The strong do what they will.
The weak do what they must.
为人态度:
John Wooden
Talent is God given--Be Humble.
Fame is man given-- Be Thankful.
Conceit is self given --Be Careful.
行动:
Theodore Roosevelt
Do what you can , with what you have , with where you are.
Publilius Syrus Maxim
No one knows what he can do till he tries.
Terence
There is nothing so easy but that it becomes difficult when you do it
reluctantly.
Thomas Fuller
A wise man turns chance into good fortune.
William Hazlitt
Prosperity is a great teacher;
adversity is a greater.
William Penn
No pains, no palm;
no thorns, no throne;
no gall , no glory;
no cross, no crown.
Will Rogers
Even if you're on the right track, you'll get run over... if you just
sit there.
Opportunity rarely knocks on your door.
Knock rather on opportunity's door if you ardently wish to enter.
成功与失败
Vince Lombardi
It's not whether you get knocked down.
...It's whether you get up again.
Winston Churchill
An optimist sees an opportunity in every calamity;
a pessimist sees a calamity in every opportunity.
热情(年轻/年老)
Ralph Waldo Emerson
Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.
信心
James Allen
The will to do springs from the knowledge that we can do.
Samuel Johnson
Few things are impossible to diligence and skill.
Aughey
Lost time is never found again.
Voltaire
No problem can stand the assault of sustained thinking.
Napoleon
Victory belongs to the most persevering.
细心
Euipides
Leave no stone unturned.
计划与工作
Norman Vincent Peale
Plan your work for today and every day;
then work your plan.
Henry Ford
Failure is only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
Thomas Edison
I start where the last man left off.
理想与现实
What the mind of man can conceive and believe,
the mind of a man can achieve.
勤奋
Benjamin Franklin
Plough deep while sluggards sleep.
目标
Henry David Thoreau
In the lone run men hit only what they aim at.
幸运
Emily Dickinson
Luck is not chance...
It's toil...
Fortune's expensive smile is earned.
勤奋
Thomas Edison
Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent
perspiration.
Useful Quotations
想象力
Albert Einstein
Imagination is more important than knowledge.
挑战:
Walter Begehot
The great pleasure in life is doing what people say you cannot do.
机会与准备
Abraham Lincoln
I will prepare and some day my chance will come.
信心与事实
Henry Ford
Whether you think you can or think you can't -- you are right.
English Proverb
Where there's a will there's a way.
There is no failure excepting no longer trying.
Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.
下面是几个不错的摸版:
Recently there is a debate over whether …..Some people assert that..,
while other people believe that…As a matter of fact, the issue of whether
….. is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different
views due to their distinct backgrounds. Therefore, there is not a
universal answer to this question, and whether one choice takes precedence
over the other may quite depend on the specific situation. The decision,
nevertheless, is not an easy one to make. Actually, the final judgment
should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, however,
I agree that …. , and do not agree that….. My view can be greatly
substantiated by the following discussions.
The first argument that can be presented to develop my position is that… A
good example may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance, it is
obvious that….
In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The
reason is not far to seek…. To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence,
another equally important aspect is that….
Admittedly, it may be true that …. in some conditions. However, this alone
does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that ….,Actually, these
cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen
the view that…When the advantages and disadvantages of x and y are
carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…
To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate
with each other to generate an integrate whole and thus become more
convincing than any single one of them, we may be comfortable to say that
…., because….
In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion,
the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that…
Further more, he also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s
argument appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will
reveal how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the
invalidity of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following
reasons.
In the first place, this argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that ….
The author unfairly assumes that…. However, the assumption is questionable
because the author provides no evidence to support this argument. The
arguer fails to take into account other facts that might contribute to the
result that …….. It is likely that , ……………..; it is also likely that
………………………… Any of these scenarios, if true, would show that
…………………..
Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.
In the second place, the argument commits a logic fallacy of “after this
and therefore because of this”. In no case can the mere fact that… be
cited as evidence to support the assumption that there is a causal-effect
relationship between A and B. Moreover, that just because B can be
statistically correlated with A does not necessarily mean that A is the
cause of B. In fact, the author has obviously neglected the possibility of
other alternative facts such as…, or … may contribute to a certain extent
to B. It may be only a coincidence that …… . Unless the author can rule
out other factors relevant to …, this assumption in question can not be
accepted.
In the third place, the evidence that the author provides is insufficient
to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient
to establish a general conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is
representative of all A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted.
In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any
conclusion at all.
In the fourth place, the argument has also committed a false analogy
fallacy. The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in
all respects, and the author assumes without justification that all things
are equal, and that the background conditions have remained the same at
different times or at different locations. There is, however, no guarantee
that this is the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support
this assumption. Lacking this assumption, the conclusion that … is
entirely unfounded. In fact, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn
from B are applicable to A. Differences between A and B clearly out weight
the similarities, thus making the analogy highly less than valid. For
example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B
to do....
In addition, the conclusion unjustifiably relies on the poll while the
validity of the survey itself is doubtful. The poll cited by the author is
too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who, when, how and
by whom the survey is conducted, neither does it mention what is the sample
size, or how the samples are selected. Until these questions are answered
the results are worthless as evidence to support that….
Besides, the author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive
alternatives. However, the author has never offered any reasons or
evidences for imposing an either/or choice. Common sense and observation
tells us that adjoining both A and B might produce better results.
To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in
the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims. To
make the argument more convincing concerning…. , the arguer would have to
provide more information that………………. The arguer should also
demonstrate that……………….to make this argument logically acceptable.
Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to
consider the whole situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be
adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he….
In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that …. Because
the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the
arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us
that…. In addition, the arguer could have to provide more precise
information to support his claim.
It is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any number
of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior products,
careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor employee expense
monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies and other
wasteful spending
英语写作常用句型
#段首句
**对立观点命题形式的首句
**单一观点式 (agree , disagree)
#中间句
**对立观点式
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
**单一观点式
*agree
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
*disagree
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
*选择观点式
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
#结尾句
段首句:
(一)对立观点命题形式的首句:
1.Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A.
2.Some people say A, other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.
3.There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A, some prefer to CHOOSE B. Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.
4.From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B .
5.Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .
6.In general , I prefer to _____ .
7.As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .
8.When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .
9.When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .
10.At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .
11.When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .
12.When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .
13.When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .
14.When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .
15.While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____ .
(二)单一观点式
A . Agree
1.One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .
2.I would follow the reasoning that _____ .
3.Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .
4.I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .
5.After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .
6.my arguments for point are listed as follows.
7.I agree with the above statement because _____ .
8.Nowhere in the world has the issue of _____ been so much debated like in our society .
9.I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation because _____ .
10.Thinking logically , I can only say that the title statement is valid because _____ .
11.I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that _____ .
12.Some may hold the opinion that AAA . But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _____ .
13.Many one have the idea that AAA . However , many others disagree with this argument . But both side of the problem whether _____ are supported by good reasons .
14.Recently , it has been much debated over the problem of AAA . Those who object to AAA announce that _____ . But those who favor AAA utter a sonorous voice that _____ .
15.Recently , there is vehement discussion on the issue of _____ . Those who criticize _____ argue that _____ . They claim that _____ . But people who firmly advocate _____ , on the other hand , argue that _____ .
16.There is a much-debated problem today about _____ . Those who object to _____ argue that _____ . They are very sure about _____ . But people who prefer _____ , on the other hand , claim that _____ .
B . Disagree
1.Until recently , _____ was viewed as _____ . But people are taking a fresh look at it .
2.Recently , we often hear about _____ . But is it ?
3.These days , it is often heard about _____ . But is this really the truth ?
4.I feel such an attitude is negative , and that it can bring _____.
5.Some people argue as if it is a general truth that _____ . But to be frank , I cannot agree with them for the flowing reasons .
6.Despite the fact that many people believe that _____ , I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis .
7.Although some people hold the opinion that _____ , I wonder whether the argument could bear close examination .
8.In the nationwide , discussion , many people argue that _____ . But I can say nothing but _____ .
9.Advocates of AAA proclaim that _____ , but I _____ .
10.Until recently , _____ was regarded as _____ . But _____ .
11.Some people think that _____ , but I disagree with this opinion for numerous reasons , as presented below .
12.Now , it is increasingly mentioned that _____ . Such people think _____ . But I can only cast doubt on whether _____ .
13.Now , it is widely believed that _____ . These people think _____ . But I wonder if _____ .
14.I cannot totally the idea that _____ . Because , in my point of view , I believe _____ .
15.As a matter of fact , I support that _____ , but I cannot agree with the title statement .
16.Nowadays , it is widely held that _____ . People of this kind think _____ .But I doubt whether _____ .
中间句:
(一)对立观点式
A . 首次提出观点
1. My opinion is that _____ .
2. I would prefer A rather than B because _____ .
3. I can see that many advantages of _____ are obvious .
4. The question is , which construction comes first --- A or B ?
5. One of the attraction of _____ is that _____ .
6. Perhaps part of the problem is that _____ and what is true of A cab be also applied to B .
7. The dilemma is whether it is advisable to _____ .
8. In most cases , the most difficult decision for _____ is that whether to _____ .
9. While A is guilty of some of the faults of B --- such as _____ , its strength is easily seen .
10. A is preferable in many ways , and perhaps the most basic is that _____ .
11. Both patterns of _____ present disadvantages , however _____ .
12. Certainly , I am aware that both methods have potential pitfalls , but _____ .
13. Each advantage of A outweighs that of B.
14. The advantages of A carry more weight than those ofB .
15. The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
16. Undeniable , A is good in many aspects , however , it has its disadvantages , too . For one thing , it _____ , For another , it _____ .
17. The effect of comparison is heightened by the unique advantage B enjoys .
18. Despite that A has a unique advantage over _____ , it cannot compete with B in _____ .
19. Despite the fact that A enjoys considerable advantage of _____ , it cannot compete with B in _____ .
20. Although A possesses substantial advantage over _____ , it cannot compete with B/ in _____ .
21. There are many factors accountable for _____ . For one thing _____ . For Another , _____ .
22. The advantages claimed for A over B are now being debated .
B . 进一步论述
1. Nonetheless , measure for measure , I confess that A is more advantageous .
2. I also see a better reason for them who prefer to _____ .
3. _____ , by contrast , is blessed with advantages .
4. On a ____ level , they are advisable and deserve more consideration because _____ .
5. from a personal perspective , I would also prefer A in that _____ .
6. Another reason why I would rather prefer B is that _____ .
7. In _____ , however , I'm sure I will find more concrete advantages .
8. To make a moral sense , I think that another reason why I prefer B is that _____ .
9. There is another reason why I cast my preference for _____ .
10. A is also in a position of advantage because _____ .
考研英语作文务必熟记的重点句式
1. It is (has been) estimated that the world's population could reach 6 billion by the end of the century.
2. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies to co
ntrol population growth while raising the quality of the population.
3. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't utter a word.
4. It's hard to say whether the plan is practicable.
5. It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.
6. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
7. As is known man is the product of labour.
8. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we can overcome.
9. It seems certain that they have made a series of experiments.
10. It must be admitted that you haven't done what you promised to do.
11. It is certain that we have a long way to go.
12. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for peace.
13. It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours each day.
14. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.
15. It is said that bats have been using radar for millions of years.
16. To tell the truth, many mistakes we made could have been avoided.
17. As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
18. In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you saw.
19. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.
20. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.
21. It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, made up of atoms.
22. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.
23. It has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose base must be completed within this year.
24. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth may not apply to things happening here.
25. It is obvious (evident) that the success of the innovation depends on our concerted efforts.
26. It is natural that one may have trouble expressing complicated ideas in simple English.
27. We will be successful as long as we persevere.
28. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is being carried out.
29. It is true that we must redouble our efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed countries.
30. I take it for granted that they will support this idea. I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea.
31. In a certain sense, a successful scientist is a person who is never satisfied with what he has achieved.
32. It is a common saying that man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.
33. The oceans do not so much divide the world as unite it.
34. It can be said that without knowledge of science and technology, it is impossible to build socialist modernizations.
35. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the production.
36. Now in China, more and more families can afford to buy high-grade goods, such as washing machines, TV sets, videocorders.
作文篇!
刚刚整理资料时发现的,感觉还不错啊!
作文关键是多写,多背,尤其是一些好词,好句,好的论说文。
学会了怎样起承转合,那你的作文就算基本过关了。
第一部分是曹其军作文指导。
第二部分是朱太奇的作文讲座。
第三部分是作文常见句型(分为首段,中间段和结尾段)
第四部分是几个作文模版
第五部分是作文的写作步骤(即如何起承转合)
如果你有什么好的作文也可以贴上来,让我们大家一起分享:)
考研作文一:
考研作文讲座
曹其军
曹说:考场作文通常是写成三段(四段当然也可以,不过一般情况下三段比较合适)。但
是从改卷老师的角度,这三段份量是不同的。一般看到第一段,印象分就已经下来了,所
以第一段很关键。第二段老师一般不看,即便看也只是看有没有明显的病句。然后会着重
再看一下第三段。从上面可以看出来,第一段跟第三段是关键,有什么特殊的优美的句子
尽管用,长难句最好。但是第二段要用短句而不要用长句(!!!切记),因为长句容易
出错。
所以曹的作文着重讲的就是第一段跟第三段如何写。至于第二段,自己发挥去。
我会把去年的一些笔记(很可惜大部分记在笔记本上丢了仅剩下记在讲义上的一些残余)
一起写出来。并且加上脚注。黑体表示一个字都不能改,就照单背下。斜体表示可以改的地方。
曹的作文一共分成八个MODEL,下面是Model 1,在看完model后最好背下来,然后完成
后面的application,做一两篇熟悉一下。
MODEL 1 Poblem-Solution(问题以及问题的解决)
Smaple One
As can be easily observed from the cartoon, intellectuals of middle agg in our country are
making great contributions, but they also suffer from the poor working and living conditions.
Just take a look at the man in the picture. Under the dim light, he is bent on his study while
taking food. He is thin and the bottles of medicine on the table show that he is very poor in health.
From the picture, it is obvious that the issue of intellectuals' treatment has really become more
and more serious.
This problem may arise from the following factors. To begin with, there is often a shortage of investment on scientific study. According to a recently published report from the State Council(国务院), only 3% of the total GDP was invested in the development of science and technology last year. The report also predicts that future investment will most probably remain unchanged. Consequently, the shortage of fund has a direct impact upon intellectuals' work and health. In the second place, though the central government(中央政府) has made various policies to improve intellectures' conditions, some local governments won't implement these policies effectively. Sometimes these governments even intentionally pay no attention to the requests by intellectuals. Last but not the least, most of the intellectuals ignore the importance of sports and outdoor activities. This also gives rise to their poor health and less efficient work.
The current situation calls for an immediate solution indeed. In my opinion, both the government and the intellectuals should play their role. On one hand, the government should grant more funds to intellectuals. On the other hand, intellectuals should be aware of the importance of their health, and try every means to build up their health. Only in these co-operative efforts, I believe , will the problem be efficiently resolved.
第一段提出问题,这个是个sample是个漫画式作文,但是可以归到model 1里面。注意一下 ,该漫画对第二,三两段没有任何响,象第二段的According to 之类的废话,不要迟疑
,背下来。
Sample Two
Nowadays one of the fundamental problems China is faced with is the increasing illiteracy(可改成sociological,environmental等根据topic) among the adolescents. According to a recent survey made by Dr. Wang, head of educational department of Beijing University, about 24% of the children between 8 to 15 years old have dropped out of school across the country. The same survey also shows that the number of drop-outs is likely to grow in the years to come. Therefore, it is very clear that illiteracy has been getting more and more serious.(只有serious了才能体现其紧迫感重要性)
To account for illiteracy, people have come up with various causes as demonstrated below. For one thing, many families are still too poor to afford schooling for their kids. Take my neighbor as an example(或者A good case in point is my neighbour). There are five members and four adults were laid off(下岗符合国情) last year. Then life gets very hard for them. Finally, the only child has to leave the school. Actually, poverty is always the major factor behind illiteracy in China. On the other hand, some parents believe that schooling is useless, particularly for girls. They often force their kids to leave school and send them to work.. In the end, some students are bored of the school life, and they drop out to escape teachers and school lesson.
Whatever the reason, the issue has turned a crippling(造成重大损害的)force to the development of our country. Therefore, some measures should be taken to put an end to this problem. On one hand, our government should make stricter law to forbid parents to take kids away from school. In addition, more funds should be put in to the help of those poor students. On the other hand, we should launch a publicizing campaign(群众运动,具有中国特色,一定要写) to enhance people's awareness of the harmfulness of illiteracy to our economy and life. Only through these attempts can we hope to solve the problem.
这个model我极其喜爱,因为我考研就是套这个model的,虽然我写完后都不知道写什么意
思,但是还是得到了一个比较高的分数。第一段提出了问题,就是中国的文盲问题。第二
段分析现象,产生原因。大家千万不要小看了Take my neighbor as an example这句话,
是举出证据支持论点,不论什么事情,都说你的neighbor,比方说爱滋病问题,你就说邻
居家有人得了爱滋病,比方说下岗,就说邻居家全部下岗生不如死。再注意一下poverty
is always the major factor behind ,这里是原因前结果后的句子,背。
第三段极力推荐背下来,第一句中的reason,如果是说“结果”则要换成consequence;最
后的country可以换成society,life,world之类的词语。第一句起到承上启下的作用,优
美,背。群众运动不能忘记,否则文革怎么产生,要发动群众运动去enhance people's a
wareness增强民众的觉悟,重要,背。最后一句倒装句保证让老师对你的印象更好。
Application:
1 On Widespread Superstition(Fa Lun gong etc.) 普遍流行的迷信
A Current Situation
B Some Consequences (家庭被破坏,影响身体健康,注意影响身体健康是万金 油)
C suggestions
2 Desertification(土壤沙漠化)
A present condition
B possible effects (诸如粮食短缺城市消失)
C solutions
3 Women's salaries are significantly lower than men's in business in different countries as the following tow tables show. Make full use of the information and write an essay of about 200 words. Be sure to include your comment.(table省略)
这个是女性待遇问题,仿造Sample One。
Model 2 Positive-Enhancement
Sample One
There has been a growing concern among the general public over the population census which is now being conducted in our country. According to a recent poll made by Beijing Youth Daily, a local newspaper, about 87 percent of the residents have a good understanding of the census, and they are very cooperative(支持)with it. The same survey also shows that more
people are concerned about the result of the census. It can be easily concluded, therefore, that the census has become an important issue in our life.
Its importance may be demonstrated in two ways as follow. To begin with, the census is directly related to the society in general. On one hand, our country has long carried out the policy of birth control, and regular census may help us get a better idea of our population growth. On the other hand, with the reform and opening-up, there has been a widespread mass migration movement. Many farmers leave their home villages to seek job in the cities. Then it is necessary to know the population migration trend through census, so that the government may make better use of the labor force. What's more, the census is bound up with our personal life. It is the best way to measure our living standard, including living space, education level, and employment.
As the issue of census plays such a key role in our society and life, due attention should be paid from both the government and the general public. The government should make sure that the census is successfully done and finished, and the general public should offer a helping hand whenever necessary. As for myself, I should take part in the publicizing campaign so that more people will understand the importance of census.
这个model是讲好得东西,比如说入世,申奥,大学合并(其实我觉得大学合并简
直是垃圾不过既然国家这么做所以如果出题目的时候你只能说它是好的)。
a growing concern,越来越关注,多好的说法。注意第一段还把北京青年报给搬
了出来,跟model 1 的北大教授一样,这是给人权威的说法。咱们是小人物阿说话不顶
事,但是权威人物或者正式刊物可就不一样了。 be cooperative with 支持,既然是好
的东西公众自然都要支持了,不支持就罚你的款^_^。
第二段是垃圾自己去编,在分析好的时候提供如下建议,分析其对社会好,对生活
好,对身体好。
看第三段,due attention,应有的重视,很少人能想到这个词吧。the general
public should offer a helping hand whenever necessary,对于老百姓来说,该出手
时候就出手,决不能迟疑。最后提到As for myself,对于我们这样的小人物,所能做的
唯一的事情,就是参与宣传活动。
Application: 1 Project Hope
2 On Bid for Olympic Games
3 University Merging(就是臭名昭著的大学合并)
大学合并有什么好处呢?
节约资源,有更多地方锻炼身体(虽然风马牛不相及)
但是最关键是要有幻想,因为你即便写的好处在道理上狗屁不通
也没人会管你,你所做的只是凑字数!!!
Model 3 Point-Evidence(neutral topic + proverb + definition)
中性主题 谚语
Sample One
As shown in the graph, it can be easily concluded that the past twenty years have witnessed some ups and downs in China's growth rate whereas there has been a steady increase in the amount of GDP. According to the statistics published by the State Bureau of Statistics in 1978, China's GDP was 362.4 billion in Renminbi, and it grew to be 7477.2 billion in 1997,almost 27 times higher. From the graph, it can also be predicted that China's GDP will continue to increase in the future while its growth rate remains steady.
This tendency of GDP increase may be attributed to the following reasons. First of all, with the improvement of people's living standard, there will be a greater demand for goods and services of all kinds. A good case in point is the Internet. As it comes into our daily life, people need more information and better services. There will provide and incentive for further development in computer technology and manpower. What's more, in terms of production, China will need to build more roads, railways, and power stations in order to become stronger. More natural resources need to be exploited and used for the benefit of people. Last but not the least, China's entry into WTO will greatly improve the export environment of international trade. As a result, the future export is going to play a more important role in China's GDP growth.
Based on those reasons as illustrated above,I firmly believe that China will experience a stage of continuous, steady and healthy expansion in the years to come. In the long run, it is evident that China will become ever-stronger, and the Chinese will live a better life than ever.
注意哦,考场上***不准写比较结构***,太容易出错了!!!上面这篇范文,就提
到了比较级的用法。look,要用就用这种简单明了不会出错的比较级用法,列举出前后
的数据,然后说“almost xx times higher”。
看第一句哦,the past twenty years have witnessed,这是一种表示被动的说法
,根据时间段。in China's growth中in用来表示该文主题。还有个很优美的形容词stea
dy,如果是大起大落要用sharp哦。increase表示增加,如果图中是下落就要用fall或者
decrease。 grew to be 如果是下降要改成dropped to be。
本文的第三段可写可不写,都是垃圾,不过为了凑段数凑字数还是要写的拉hiahia
Sample Two
As we all know, honesty is the best policy. This is an accumulated experience we inherit from our forefathers, and now it is still widely applied to our daily life.
To illustrate the point, let me cite a case of Nokia, a mobile phone manufac turer. In the very beginning, it had the largest marker share in China. According to an official publication released in July 1999, about 47 percent of mobile phone users expressed their preference for Nokia, while only 16 percent liked Motorola, Nokia's major competitor. This year, however, the opposite situation occurs, and Nokia is said to be phasing out quickly. A major reason behind this sudden reversion, as pointed out by some experts, lies with Nokia's being dishonest with its product and service. For example, Nokia promised free service for repair, but any real repair may cost dearly. This way, by and by, Nokia is losing its customers and market.
A lesson that we can draw from this example is quite obvious. Honesty is crucial and essential to any one. With the rapid development of internet and other modern technologies, our world is changing fast and becoming increasingly uncertain. It is, therefore, not only important but necessary to be honest now.
Application: 1。 Ageing Population in China
生活水平提高,医疗水平发展,出生率下降.
2。 When in Rome, do as Romans do.(i.e. adaptatin to life or
society)
3。 What does love mean to us?
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Model 4 Fact-Method
Sample One
Nowadays tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to finance one’s college education has become a matter of great concern for many people, particularly the young students and their family. Actually just as there is more than one way to skin a cat, so it seems we can deal with tuition and fees in many ways. Some can get all the needed money from their parents. Some others can apply for a loan specially set up for college students. Still others can also raise the money completely by themselves, by doing s full-time job in the summer and winter holidays. Or even others can ask their parents to provide the greater part and earn the rest in their spare time by doing a part-time job.
In my opinion, the last method may prove to be quite beneficial in many respects. Having obtained most of the tuition and fees from one’s parents, one needn’t w worry too much about the money and can concentrate on his studies. After all, it is the duty of any college student to study hard and well. On the other hand, a part-time job in one’s spare time will enrich his campus life. Through the part-time job one can make a lot of friends, improve one’s social skills and learn many practical things. Therefore, I would choose this way, if possible, to cover my tuition and fees.
上面范文是一年六级考试的作文,题目是 How do I finance my college education?注意这种题所谓的method就是要回答HOW。
如果要扩充一种方法就是用邻居的故事展开。
Application: 1. How to succeed in a job interview?
2. On making friends.
3. Arranging tour for a coming friend.
Model 5 contrast side A against side B 针锋相对
Sample One
As regards the farmer migration into the cities, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. A majority of people argue that this mass migration is beneficial to the development of both the countryside and the cities. Other people, however, hold that there are more disadvantages arising from this migration movement.
People who believe in the beneficial side of such migration may have some arguments as follows. To begin with, farmers can earn more money by finding jobs in the cities. Most of them will send part of their income back home to their family. This in turn helps expand the economy of the countryside. What’s more, these farmers also help develop the cities in many ways. According to a recent survey as published in the newspaper, most of the construction projects in Beijing are actually done by farmers.
In contrast, some people think that farmer migration may give rise to(导致) a series of negative effects as well. These people worry that, with the spread of migration, more land in the countryside will be deserted. This will give rise to a shortage of grain. Some facts about widespread of deserted land have been published recently in the newspapers. In addition, it is also suggested that rising crimes in the cities are related to this migration.
Just as any coin has two sides, it’s no exception with the issue of farmer migration. Though this migration has indeed brought about some negative effects on our society, its benefits are even more obvious. In my opinion, our government should try its best to raise the price of agricultural products, so that farmers needn’t go into the cities to get rich. Of course, when there is a surplus of labor force in the countryside, farmers should also be encouraged to move to cities for a better living.
As regards。。。后跟名词或用whether加动词加句子。
第三段的in contrast表示二三两段内容针锋相对。
Application: 1. On Internet in Our Life 信息丰富,方便交流VS 浪费金钱,损害健康
2. Should college students set up their company?
挣钱,服务社会 VS 影响学业,影响健康
3. To job - hop(跳槽) or not : this is a problem
能挣更多money VS 没法build a career,失信于人
提示:如果想不到就想健康。放心,老师不会因为你信口雌黄而特别留意你的作文。
Model 6 Comparison between A and B
Sample One
When it comes to the choice between going to the West and staying in cities, different graduates hold radically different views. Some people argue that it’s the right time to go to the West. Other people, however, believe that staying in cities outweighs going to the West in almost every aspect.
In the eyes of the first group of people, going to the West is characterized(具有如下特点) by the following features. For a start, with the policy to develop the West, there will be more chances of improving oneself and using the textbook knowledge, and the hence the best choice for graduates., In the second place, the West is rich in natural resources, the exploitation of which calls for talents with higher education. In the West, the graduates will easily turn their knowledge to use. Of course, it is also admitted that some inconveniences will come up.(该句表示转折,必须写) For example, there is a poor transportation in the West. Sometimes it takes hours on the road when people are traveling from one place to another.
In comparison, those who argue for staying in cities have some arguments as follows. On one hand, the cities will provide a better living conditions. S we all know, there is still a wide gap between the West and the East. To seek a better life is undoubtedly a major goal for most of the graduates. On the other hand, in this age of information and technology, the urban environment enables graduates to be up to date. However, staying in the cities also brings some handicaps to young graduates(这句就是提出带来不足的地方). One aspect may be that there will be fierce competition in the cities for job opportunities and housing.
As discussed above, it is obvious that each side has its distinctive characteristics. If I am allowed to make a decision, I prefer going to the West for the following two considerations. For one thing, I like the local culture in the West, and I’ve long thought of getting a deep understanding of the West. For another, the West can allow me to choose my own way of lining.
Application: 1. Where to educate our Kids: abroad or at Home?
2. Shopping by Internet or by Window: which way?
3. Campus living: a roommate or alone?
Model 7 Letter(E-mail)
Sample One
To: bjrv@163.com
From: reader@hotmail.com
Subject: China Recommendation System 注意,这四行都是格式
Data: October 10,2001
这里空一行
Dear Editor:
这里再空一行
As is fairly well-known to anyone, particularly the young, Recommendation Admission System has been in practice in China over the past 20 years. There is no denying that the System has benefited a large number of senior middle school graduates. But in my point of view, the System does more harm and should be completely denied as soon as possible.
In support of my view, the very first point I would like to touch upon is concerned with equality among the candidates, which I regard as a basic right to each student. The System offers opportunity to quite a few lucky ones while the majority of students have to compete fiercely for this opportunity. As it is, most candidates are actually discriminated against in one way or the other. What’s more, the System often works in the interest of those people who can manage to get favorable recommendation from the senior middle school. There are already quite a few reports in various media of such abuse of the System. Ss a result, the System can not ensure that the most outstanding students are admitted. To make things worse, the whole society may lose its confidence in this test system.
Accordingly, I strongly believe it meaningful and significant to suspend the Recommendation Admission System. It is also my hope that every candidate can realize his dream through equal competition.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Hai
注意格式哟,每段必须空一行,段首不空格。
信函必须通过信体体现出身份。
Sample Two (狂背)
788 North 32nd Street
Milwaukee,Wisconsin 53216
Nov. 30. 2001
Mr. Frederick Broadheim 收信人名字
Director of Marketing 收信人职务
Deka Chemicals, Inc. 收信人单位
5211 Chekmate Drive 收信人地址
Anchorage, Alaska 99504
Dear Mr.Broadheim: (如果名字不知道的话,这里写 Dear Sir/Madam)
The enclosed resume shows some of the reasons why I believe I am qualified to assume the position of assistant product manager, listed in the October issue of American Marketing(这个是广告登在何处,求职信必须写消息来源) magazine. Would you please consider me an applicant for the job?(标点都不能改)
As my resume shows, I received my BA in marketing(这里改成你自己的专业) from Marquette University last month. For the past four years, I have worked for the Wisconsin Metals Company, part time while school was in session and full time in summers. During these four years, I have performed various duties in the marketing department, including consumer research work for the product managers. In addition, my minor in Marquette was in chemistry(改成辅修专业), and I received A or B+ grades in all my chemistry courses.
What my resume does not show is that I am an ambitious(有理想有抱负), hard working person who enjoys the challenges(职务的挑战) of product development and marketing , challenges (给对方戴高帽,最高境界就是面不红耳不赤地吹捧)which I know Deka Chemicals has met so well for so many years. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you my qualifications for the position of assistant product manager for Deka. I understand from your ad. that an interview can be arranged in the Milwaukee area in early December. Please write or call me to arrange an interview at you convenience. My telephone number is 555-7875.
Sincerely yours,
Alfred h.Yellen
Enclosure (这里代表了前文的resume)
Application: 1. A letter of Application
2. An E-mail of Invitation for a Meeting
3.A letter of recommendation
Model 8 Report (Memo + Speech)
Sample One
To: Mr.G.Gates
From: John J.Repensek
Subject: Views on China’s Entry into WTO
Data: December 20.2001
As required I chose 500 middle class subjects and asked them, through telephone, about what they thought about the recent entry of China into WTO. Here is what I get from the survey.
For the majority of people(about 56% of the total), this entry into WTO is a great success both nationally and internationally. They argue that, on one hand, it stands for the government’s determination to open China further to the world. In so doing, the ordinary people can benefit the most. On the other hand, they also believe that WTO needs China, for it is well known that China, with the largest population, is quickly becoming the largest market on the globe.
A smaller group of subjects(about 35% of the total) remain suspicious, or pessimistic, of the event. They express deep concern for the future of China’s nationalized enterprises. For them, foreign competitors would certainly destroy domestic products and service system. Besides, they hold that there will be millions of unemployment.
Still about 9% of the respondents show no interest in the topic, and they seem to be wholly ignorant of the matter. When the event was explained, they replied that it has nothing to do with them or their life.
If you need any further information on the survey, please let me know.
Application: 1. A speech on Tele-education
2. A memo on Jobs Assignment
3. A report on a Traffic Accident
考研作文二:
短文写作基本模式
(一)议论文
(1)
It is generally believed that . . is a hot topic which is widely talked about both at home and abroad .Now our government attaches great importance to solving this problem.Scicntists in this field have put forward a number of suggestions tending to relieve it.To begin with,we should . . Furthermore, . . It is clear that . . .
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people think that . . According to them,all of us should . . Others argue that . . In their opinion,nobody can . . without . . There is no doubt that . . As a consequence . .
In short,I firmly support the view that . . It is because . . So my conclusion is that . . (107 words)
(2)
There is no denying the fact that … is popular topic which is much talked about not only by …, but also by … It is generally thought that … The reasons for … are as follows.To begin with, … Secondly , … Therefore,we should attach great significance to solving the problem.
There are , I think ,at least two possible ways to cope with it .The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do) … The other policy that is worth adopting is to work out new regulations to (do) … Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future.
To conclude ,it seems obvious … So the prospect we are looking forward to will be both bright and encouraging.(127 words)
(二)图表作文
As is shown in the table (or in the picutre) , … dropped from … in 1996 .According to the figures given in the table, … has greatly increased ( or decreased ) in the past … years ( or decades ), reaching … in 1996.From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline ( or rise ) in … It is clear that …
There are at least two good reasons for … On the one hand, … Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in … On the other hand, … is due to the fact that … In addition, … is responsible for … Maybe there are some other reasons to show … But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.
As far as I am concerned, I believe that …… I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(126 words)
好作文不得不用的句子
常用句型
段首句
1. ______________ is known as one of the most serious problems in today’s society. We can see it almost everywhere. As the graph depicts, ______________ .
2. From the cartoon, we can see that. It’s a forceful satire on the kind of ______________ .
3. From the first graph, we learn that ______________. According to the statistics shown in the second graph, we can see that ______________.
4. This table shown us that ______________. The figures indicate that there is an inspiring tendency of ______________.
5. What you first think of when seeing this cartoon might be that ______________. As a matter of fact, this cartoon reveals a typical social phenomenon.
6. According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
7. There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
8. Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.
9. Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
10. ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
11. Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
12. For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
13. It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
14. ______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can’t be avoided.
15. ______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
16. Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
17. ______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
18. Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.
19. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
20. It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.
21. There is an old saying, ______________. It’s the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.
22. The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.
23. ______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.
24. One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
25. One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.
26. “Why do ______________?” Many people often ask questions like this.
27. In recent years, there is a general tendency to ______________. According to a study, there is ______________. compared with ______________ last year. Why ______________?
28. According to a survey, there is a growing number of ______________. What brings this result? The main reason rests with.
29. Some people prefer to ______________. In their opinion, ______________. In addition, ______________. Nevertheless, nowadays, ______________ has become more and more common.
30. Today, there ______________, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ______________ second, ______________. What makes things worse is that ______________.
31. Nowadays, ______________ has become a problem we have to face. Though it’s easier said than done, with the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it.
32. Many people are inclined to ______________. In their opinion, ______________. They believe that ______________.
33. From the graph/chart, we know the statistics of ______________ and ______________. It can be seen easily that ______________.
34. According to the two graphs presented, it can be observed that ______________. In the left graph, ______________. At the same time, ______________ as the right graph shows.
35. The graph shows the general trend in ______________.
36. According to the figures/numbers/statistics/percentages in the table/chart/bar graph/line graph, it can be seen that ______________. Obviously, ______________, but why?
37. The figure indicates/shows/suggests/proves that ______________. There is a steady/rapid development/trend of ______________.
38. These days we are often told that ______________. But is it true?
39. These days we often hear about ______________. But is this really the case?
40. One of the great writers once said that ______________. Now it still has a realistic significance.
41. In our history, the idea that ______________ never has been so popular. On one hand, ______________, on the other hand, ______________.
42. There are different opinions among people as to ______________. Some people suggest that ______________.
43. Some people hold the opinion that ______________ is superior to ______________ in many ways: Others, however, disagree with it.
44. Nowadays although more and more people ______________, still there are some who think ______________, they may think ______________.
中间段
1. The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that ______________. Consequently, ______________.
2. No matter you like it or not, AAA has become more and more popular and there are many reason for it.
3. It’s an urgent task for us to change this unfavorable situation: ______________.
4. The picture can reminds you of some strange, yet familiar phenomena existing in our society.
5. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that ______________. Others argue that ______________.
6. Confronted with AAA, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.
7. However, ______________ may cause some problems. First, it is ______________. Second, ______________. Finally, ______________. So, it is clear that ______________ has its advantages and disadvantages.
8. Although ______________ has a great advantage of ______________, it can’t compete with ______________ in ______________.
9. ______________ may be preferable to ______________, but ______________ suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.
10. The advantages of ______________ are much greater that those of ______________. For instance, ______________.
11. ______________ may be preferable to ______________, but it also suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.
12. But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ______________. For instance, ______________. Worst of all, ______________.
13. There are many ways to ______________. First, ______________. Second, ______________. Third, ______________.
14. On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ______________. They believe ______________. Moreover, they think ______________.
15. There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can ______________, there are a number of advantages of ______________. Another solution is to ______________.
16. It is high time that something was done about it. For example, ______________. In addition, ______________. All these measures will certainly ______________.
17. There are some other people, who ______________. Their reasons are different, something for ______________, sometimes for ______________, and sometimes simply for ______________.
18. ______________ is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction. First, ______________. What’s more, ______________. Most important of all, ______________.
19. However, if not managed properly, ______________ can create many problems. Sometimes ______________. Furthermore, ______________. Therefore, ______________ has been gaining public concern.
20. There are probably many reasons for ______________. First, ______________. Second, ______________. Finally, ______________.
21. Well, why is there ______________? I think there might be two reasons. One is ______________, and the other is ______________.
22. There are, I think, two main reasons for ______________. In the first place, ______________. In the second place, ______________. Therefore, ______________.
23. Why ______________? For one thing, ______________. For another, ______________. Perhaps the main reason is ______________.
24. It is no easy job to find the reasons for this tendency which involves several complicated factors. For some ______________. For others ______________.
25. Why ______________? The first reason is that ______________. The second reason is ______________. The third is ______________. For all this, the main cause of ______________ is due to ______________.
26. It is reasonable to maintain that ______________, but it would be foolish to persist that ______________. There are three reasons ______________.
27. The explanation for this problem involves many factors. For one thins, ______________. For another, ______________. Still ______________.
28. The causes for ______________ are varied. They include ______________. Perhaps the main cause is ______________.
29. The eventual result it brings out is ______________. And perhaps the most obvious result of ______________ is ______________.
30. However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______________ also has its own disadvantages, such as, ______________. besides, ______________.
31. ______________ will bring the society many benefits. For one thing, ______________. For another thing, ______________.
32. Why ______________? Some ______________. And the most common case is that ______________. The notable example is to ______________.
33. There are many reasons responsible for this instance, and the following are the typical ones. For one thing, ______________, in addition, ______________. The main reason is that ______________.
34. People had figured out many ways to solve this problem. Firstly ______________. Though this method has its good sides like it can ______________. One of its bad sides it brings about is that it can ______________.
35. Some reasons can explain the trend. First, ______________. Second, ______________. Third, ______________.
36. One of the reasons that is given for ______________ is that ______________.
37. A further reason why I advocate an attitude of ______________ is that ______________.
38. What is more, the essence of ______________ is that ______________, although we cannot, most of us ______________.
39. Nonetheless, I reckon that ______________ is more advantageous.
40. From a personal perspective, I also prefer to ______________ because ______________.
41. To make a moral point, I feel that ______________ is important for ______________ is that ______________.
42. The main reason why I feel that ______________ is important for ______________ is that ______________.
43. ______________ is superior in several ways, of which perhaps the most fundamental is that ______________.
44. There are numerous reasons why ______________, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones.
45. One very strong argument for ______________ is that______________.
46. Moving on to wider themes, many people would argue that ______________ is important for ______________ because ______________.
47. Of course, I am aware that both ways have potential pitfalls.
48. The advantages of ______________ carry more weight that those of ______________.
49. I can think of better illustration of this idea than the example of ______________.
50. Perhaps the most important example of ______________ is ______________.
51. I fully agree with the statement that ______________. The reasons are chiefly as follows.
52. I fully agree with the statement that ______________ because ______________.
53. As far as I am concerned, my favor goes to ______________. The followings are the reasons of my choices. Firstly ______________, secondly, ______________.
54. Of these two ways of ______________, I inclined to this point of view which ______________. First of all, ______________, secondly, ______________.
55. But there are still many people who don’t agree. They argue that ______________.
56. However, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. The idea is easily supported by foots that ______________.
57. For all the disadvantages, ______________ has its compensating advantages. Firstly ______________, secondly, ______________..
结尾句
1. The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.
2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________.
3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.
4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.
5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.
6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.
7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.
8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.
9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.
10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.
11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.
12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.
13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.
14. Personally, I believer that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.
15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.
16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.
17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.
18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.
19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.
21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.
22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.
23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.
24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.
25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.
26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.
27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.
28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately.
29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.
30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.
31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.
32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.
33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.
34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.
35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.
36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.
37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ______________.
38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.
39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.
40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.
41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________. And I believe that ______________.
42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.
43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.
44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.
45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.
46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.
47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.
48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.
49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.
50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.
51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.
52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.
53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.
54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.
55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.
56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.
57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me, ______________.
作文中常用引语和句套
作文中常用句套:
下文中出现的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.
开头:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事
(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
进行对比:
The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
承上启下:
To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...
A study of ... will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
>From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that ...
In summary, it is wiser ...
In short...
在作文中引用合适的名言警句,会给你的文章增色许多。这里收集了我本人喜爱
的一些名言,可能会对你有用。我们使用引用的位置可以在开头结尾或正文段落
中,
常见的使用形式如下:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
Useful quotations
逆境
by Robert Collier
In every adversity there lies the seed of an equivalent advantage. In
every defeat there is a lesson showing you how to win the victory
next time.
努力与成功
by Ann Landers
Opportunities are usually disguised as hard work, so most people
don't recognize them.
坚持
by Ralph Waldo Emerson
No one can cheat you out of ultimate success but yourselves.
Confucius 孔子
Our greatest glory is not in never falling...
but in rising every time we fall.
坚持
Mother Teresa
To keep a lamp burning we have to keep putting oil in it.
Henry Ford
Nothing is particularly hard if you divide it inuo small jobs.
Winston Churchill
Never, never, never, never give up.
Albert Einstein
In uhe middle of difficulty lies opportunity.
努力与成功
by Crassus
Those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly.
Thomas Edison
There is no substitute for hard work.
Leo Tolstoi
The strongest of all warriors are these two- Time and Patience.
Thomas Jefferson
I'm a great believer in luck,
and I find the harder I work...
the more I have of it.
Robert Collier
Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.
Ray A. Croc
Luck is a dividend of sweat. The more you sweat, the luckier you
get.
实际经验与间接经验
You'll learn more about a road by traveling it...
than by consulting all the maps in the world.
动机与结果
Vince Lombardi
Winning isn't everything...
but wanting to win is.
John F. Kennedy
We choose to go!to the moon and other things , oot because they are
easy, but because they are hard.
Thucydides
The strong do what they will.
The weak do what they must.
为人态度:
John Wooden
Talent is God given--Be Humble.
Fame is man given-- Be Thankful.
Conceit is self given --Be Careful.
行动:
Theodore Roosevelt
Do what you can , with what you have , with where you are.
Publilius Syrus Maxim
No one knows what he can do till he tries.
Terence
There is nothing so easy but that it becomes difficult when you do it
reluctantly.
Thomas Fuller
A wise man turns chance into good fortune.
William Hazlitt
Prosperity is a great teacher;
adversity is a greater.
William Penn
No pains, no palm;
no thorns, no throne;
no gall , no glory;
no cross, no crown.
Will Rogers
Even if you're on the right track, you'll get run over... if you just
sit there.
Opportunity rarely knocks on your door.
Knock rather on opportunity's door if you ardently wish to enter.
成功与失败
Vince Lombardi
It's not whether you get knocked down.
...It's whether you get up again.
Winston Churchill
An optimist sees an opportunity in every calamity;
a pessimist sees a calamity in every opportunity.
热情(年轻/年老)
Ralph Waldo Emerson
Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm.
信心
James Allen
The will to do springs from the knowledge that we can do.
Samuel Johnson
Few things are impossible to diligence and skill.
Aughey
Lost time is never found again.
Voltaire
No problem can stand the assault of sustained thinking.
Napoleon
Victory belongs to the most persevering.
细心
Euipides
Leave no stone unturned.
计划与工作
Norman Vincent Peale
Plan your work for today and every day;
then work your plan.
Henry Ford
Failure is only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
Thomas Edison
I start where the last man left off.
理想与现实
What the mind of man can conceive and believe,
the mind of a man can achieve.
勤奋
Benjamin Franklin
Plough deep while sluggards sleep.
目标
Henry David Thoreau
In the lone run men hit only what they aim at.
幸运
Emily Dickinson
Luck is not chance...
It's toil...
Fortune's expensive smile is earned.
勤奋
Thomas Edison
Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent
perspiration.
Useful Quotations
想象力
Albert Einstein
Imagination is more important than knowledge.
挑战:
Walter Begehot
The great pleasure in life is doing what people say you cannot do.
机会与准备
Abraham Lincoln
I will prepare and some day my chance will come.
信心与事实
Henry Ford
Whether you think you can or think you can't -- you are right.
English Proverb
Where there's a will there's a way.
There is no failure excepting no longer trying.
Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.
下面是几个不错的摸版:
Recently there is a debate over whether …..Some people assert that..,
while other people believe that…As a matter of fact, the issue of whether
….. is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different
views due to their distinct backgrounds. Therefore, there is not a
universal answer to this question, and whether one choice takes precedence
over the other may quite depend on the specific situation. The decision,
nevertheless, is not an easy one to make. Actually, the final judgment
should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, however,
I agree that …. , and do not agree that….. My view can be greatly
substantiated by the following discussions.
The first argument that can be presented to develop my position is that… A
good example may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance, it is
obvious that….
In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The
reason is not far to seek…. To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence,
another equally important aspect is that….
Admittedly, it may be true that …. in some conditions. However, this alone
does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that ….,Actually, these
cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen
the view that…When the advantages and disadvantages of x and y are
carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…
To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate
with each other to generate an integrate whole and thus become more
convincing than any single one of them, we may be comfortable to say that
…., because….
In this argument, the author concludes that… To support his conclusion,
the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that…
Further more, he also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s
argument appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will
reveal how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the
invalidity of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following
reasons.
In the first place, this argument rests on a gratuitous assumption that ….
The author unfairly assumes that…. However, the assumption is questionable
because the author provides no evidence to support this argument. The
arguer fails to take into account other facts that might contribute to the
result that …….. It is likely that , ……………..; it is also likely that
………………………… Any of these scenarios, if true, would show that
…………………..
Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.
In the second place, the argument commits a logic fallacy of “after this
and therefore because of this”. In no case can the mere fact that… be
cited as evidence to support the assumption that there is a causal-effect
relationship between A and B. Moreover, that just because B can be
statistically correlated with A does not necessarily mean that A is the
cause of B. In fact, the author has obviously neglected the possibility of
other alternative facts such as…, or … may contribute to a certain extent
to B. It may be only a coincidence that …… . Unless the author can rule
out other factors relevant to …, this assumption in question can not be
accepted.
In the third place, the evidence that the author provides is insufficient
to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient
to establish a general conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is
representative of all A, the conclusion that B… is completely unwarranted.
In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any
conclusion at all.
In the fourth place, the argument has also committed a false analogy
fallacy. The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in
all respects, and the author assumes without justification that all things
are equal, and that the background conditions have remained the same at
different times or at different locations. There is, however, no guarantee
that this is the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support
this assumption. Lacking this assumption, the conclusion that … is
entirely unfounded. In fact, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn
from B are applicable to A. Differences between A and B clearly out weight
the similarities, thus making the analogy highly less than valid. For
example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B
to do....
In addition, the conclusion unjustifiably relies on the poll while the
validity of the survey itself is doubtful. The poll cited by the author is
too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who, when, how and
by whom the survey is conducted, neither does it mention what is the sample
size, or how the samples are selected. Until these questions are answered
the results are worthless as evidence to support that….
Besides, the author assumes that A and B are mutually exclusive
alternatives. However, the author has never offered any reasons or
evidences for imposing an either/or choice. Common sense and observation
tells us that adjoining both A and B might produce better results.
To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in
the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims. To
make the argument more convincing concerning…. , the arguer would have to
provide more information that………………. The arguer should also
demonstrate that……………….to make this argument logically acceptable.
Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to
consider the whole situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be
adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he….
In conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that …. Because
the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the
arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us
that…. In addition, the arguer could have to provide more precise
information to support his claim.
It is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any number
of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior products,
careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor employee expense
monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies and other
wasteful spending
英语写作常用句型
#段首句
**对立观点命题形式的首句
**单一观点式 (agree , disagree)
#中间句
**对立观点式
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
**单一观点式
*agree
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
*disagree
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
*选择观点式
---首次提出观点
---进一步论述
#结尾句
段首句:
(一)对立观点命题形式的首句:
1.Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A.
2.Some people say A, other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.
3.There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A, some prefer to CHOOSE B. Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.
4.From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B .
5.Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .
6.In general , I prefer to _____ .
7.As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .
8.When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .
9.When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .
10.At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .
11.When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .
12.When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .
13.When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .
14.When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .
15.While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____ .
(二)单一观点式
A . Agree
1.One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .
2.I would follow the reasoning that _____ .
3.Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .
4.I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .
5.After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .
6.my arguments for point are listed as follows.
7.I agree with the above statement because _____ .
8.Nowhere in the world has the issue of _____ been so much debated like in our society .
9.I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation because _____ .
10.Thinking logically , I can only say that the title statement is valid because _____ .
11.I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that _____ .
12.Some may hold the opinion that AAA . But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _____ .
13.Many one have the idea that AAA . However , many others disagree with this argument . But both side of the problem whether _____ are supported by good reasons .
14.Recently , it has been much debated over the problem of AAA . Those who object to AAA announce that _____ . But those who favor AAA utter a sonorous voice that _____ .
15.Recently , there is vehement discussion on the issue of _____ . Those who criticize _____ argue that _____ . They claim that _____ . But people who firmly advocate _____ , on the other hand , argue that _____ .
16.There is a much-debated problem today about _____ . Those who object to _____ argue that _____ . They are very sure about _____ . But people who prefer _____ , on the other hand , claim that _____ .
B . Disagree
1.Until recently , _____ was viewed as _____ . But people are taking a fresh look at it .
2.Recently , we often hear about _____ . But is it ?
3.These days , it is often heard about _____ . But is this really the truth ?
4.I feel such an attitude is negative , and that it can bring _____.
5.Some people argue as if it is a general truth that _____ . But to be frank , I cannot agree with them for the flowing reasons .
6.Despite the fact that many people believe that _____ , I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis .
7.Although some people hold the opinion that _____ , I wonder whether the argument could bear close examination .
8.In the nationwide , discussion , many people argue that _____ . But I can say nothing but _____ .
9.Advocates of AAA proclaim that _____ , but I _____ .
10.Until recently , _____ was regarded as _____ . But _____ .
11.Some people think that _____ , but I disagree with this opinion for numerous reasons , as presented below .
12.Now , it is increasingly mentioned that _____ . Such people think _____ . But I can only cast doubt on whether _____ .
13.Now , it is widely believed that _____ . These people think _____ . But I wonder if _____ .
14.I cannot totally the idea that _____ . Because , in my point of view , I believe _____ .
15.As a matter of fact , I support that _____ , but I cannot agree with the title statement .
16.Nowadays , it is widely held that _____ . People of this kind think _____ .But I doubt whether _____ .
中间句:
(一)对立观点式
A . 首次提出观点
1. My opinion is that _____ .
2. I would prefer A rather than B because _____ .
3. I can see that many advantages of _____ are obvious .
4. The question is , which construction comes first --- A or B ?
5. One of the attraction of _____ is that _____ .
6. Perhaps part of the problem is that _____ and what is true of A cab be also applied to B .
7. The dilemma is whether it is advisable to _____ .
8. In most cases , the most difficult decision for _____ is that whether to _____ .
9. While A is guilty of some of the faults of B --- such as _____ , its strength is easily seen .
10. A is preferable in many ways , and perhaps the most basic is that _____ .
11. Both patterns of _____ present disadvantages , however _____ .
12. Certainly , I am aware that both methods have potential pitfalls , but _____ .
13. Each advantage of A outweighs that of B.
14. The advantages of A carry more weight than those ofB .
15. The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
16. Undeniable , A is good in many aspects , however , it has its disadvantages , too . For one thing , it _____ , For another , it _____ .
17. The effect of comparison is heightened by the unique advantage B enjoys .
18. Despite that A has a unique advantage over _____ , it cannot compete with B in _____ .
19. Despite the fact that A enjoys considerable advantage of _____ , it cannot compete with B in _____ .
20. Although A possesses substantial advantage over _____ , it cannot compete with B/ in _____ .
21. There are many factors accountable for _____ . For one thing _____ . For Another , _____ .
22. The advantages claimed for A over B are now being debated .
B . 进一步论述
1. Nonetheless , measure for measure , I confess that A is more advantageous .
2. I also see a better reason for them who prefer to _____ .
3. _____ , by contrast , is blessed with advantages .
4. On a ____ level , they are advisable and deserve more consideration because _____ .
5. from a personal perspective , I would also prefer A in that _____ .
6. Another reason why I would rather prefer B is that _____ .
7. In _____ , however , I'm sure I will find more concrete advantages .
8. To make a moral sense , I think that another reason why I prefer B is that _____ .
9. There is another reason why I cast my preference for _____ .
10. A is also in a position of advantage because _____ .
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